My name is Omair Mohamed. I am student in Abu Dhabi Men’s College. I graduated from high school in 2007. I started my studies I the college in 2009 after Ramadan. I am studying the English language because I need this language in my study. I am 21 years old and I am married. I live with a big family. I have 8 brothers and 10 sisters. I like some hobbies like swimming, playing foot ball and hunting. Also I like reading newspaper everyday and magazine. I’m sponsored from Abu Dhabi Police and I wish to be police office.
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